WWW: - Excellent detailed notes in which you are able to analyse key scenes and conventions in great detail
EBI: - Again, try to organise notes using subheadings or bullet points rather than large paragraphs - Can you begin to evaluate the progression of the film? How do some of the opening scenes present the situation? How do problems arise and tension build within some of the middle scenes? How do the end scenes represent some sort of resolve?
I have improved the organisation of the analysis by splitting up the paragraph into several paragraphs so it is easier to read. I have evaluated the film using Todorov's narrative theory speaking about the beginning, middle and end of the film.
WWW:
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EBI:
- Again, try to organise notes using subheadings or bullet points rather than large paragraphs
- Can you begin to evaluate the progression of the film? How do some of the opening scenes present the situation? How do problems arise and tension build within some of the middle scenes? How do the end scenes represent some sort of resolve?
I have improved the organisation of the analysis by splitting up the paragraph into several paragraphs so it is easier to read. I have evaluated the film using Todorov's narrative theory speaking about the beginning, middle and end of the film.
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