WWW: - Some reflection on changes - Identification of what will be changed
EBI: - What specific features have been edited from the first to second draft that took some time or were difficult? - How will you edit the jump scare for the final draft? How will you make this effective?
I have improved by stating what features were difficult when editing from the first to the second draft as well as talking about how the jump scare outside the protagonist's house will occur and how it is effective.
WWW:
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- Identification of what will be changed
EBI:
- What specific features have been edited from the first to second draft that took some time or were difficult?
- How will you edit the jump scare for the final draft? How will you make this effective?
I have improved by stating what features were difficult when editing from the first to the second draft as well as talking about how the jump scare outside the protagonist's house will occur and how it is effective.
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